Comments on: Red Love http://bitterhermit.wordpress.com/2008/05/30/red-love/ David M Pitchford: poet, novelist, fringemonkey Sun, 01 Nov 2009 18:14:24 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: bitterhermit http://bitterhermit.wordpress.com/2008/05/30/red-love/#comment-457 bitterhermit Fri, 27 Mar 2009 12:45:41 +0000 http://bitterhermit.wordpress.com/?p=148#comment-457 Let's find out together Let’s find out together

]]> By: mother2rah http://bitterhermit.wordpress.com/2008/05/30/red-love/#comment-456 mother2rah Fri, 27 Mar 2009 03:02:56 +0000 http://bitterhermit.wordpress.com/?p=148#comment-456 are we ever really finished? Unable to go backward, how do we find the path forward to future moments? are we ever really finished?
Unable to go backward,
how do we find the path forward
to future moments?

]]> By: bitterhermit http://bitterhermit.wordpress.com/2008/05/30/red-love/#comment-453 bitterhermit Thu, 26 Mar 2009 03:44:12 +0000 http://bitterhermit.wordpress.com/?p=148#comment-453 where did that moment go? I lament me it's passing, yet tears reflect promise . . . drops of hope resisting hell Ever do I love you best in green in flesh and blood and dice and letters with wine and cheese proud gazes, sapphire and peridot, on marvelous sons Bring me back that moment, please I wasn't even close to finished with it . . . where did that moment go?
I lament me it’s passing,
yet tears reflect promise . . .
drops of hope resisting hell

Ever do I love you best in green
in flesh and blood and dice and letters
with wine and cheese
proud gazes, sapphire and peridot, on marvelous sons

Bring me back that moment, please
I wasn’t even close to finished with it . . .

]]> By: mother2rah http://bitterhermit.wordpress.com/2008/05/30/red-love/#comment-403 mother2rah Sun, 15 Feb 2009 19:24:21 +0000 http://bitterhermit.wordpress.com/?p=148#comment-403 Yes, it works. Yes, it works.

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