Petrarchan Sonnet on a Bouguereau

For Kith & Kin
Patriot lost, mourned by no country, but
a wife and infant attend in tearful
elegy—all grief is personal—Full
as these heroes’ lives, too young they die, glut
Death with his impatient hosts. Who knows what
change each war can bring? Our headlines are full
of patriotic verve . . . Who’s this to fool?
A soldier dies for kith & kin. One may strut
to war with flag and chin held high, duty
filling heart and mind, but when the killing
begins, Life’s instinct shrugs nobility
aside so the panicked heart can beat. Thrilling
to war is the place of mad men—zealotry
a tyrant more evil than any despot king.
David M Pitchford
Picture: “Elegy” by William-Adolphe Bouguereau, 1899
Comments invited.
Poems Between Lovers
Available now via Diminuendo Press (and the usual places).
You are not Orpheus
You are not Orpheus, love, nor would I
have you be, and I will not slip in to
Hades hands. Understand my love is new
even when mundane is the order of
the day and I wish for words of passion
and wit. My days are incomplete without
a kiss from your lips, in a smile or pout.
Fanciful dreams in romantic fashion
still find their way into the world around
me, but now my prince has a face I can see
and when I look in your eyes, I see me.
My name in your voice is sweeter, I say
more musical than any poetry,
or song, Orpheus ever thought to play.
Siobhan M Pitchford
Aphrodite in Your Shadow
So well you take me as I am. I fear
to imagine what would be should that fair-
fortuned force that fogs your eyes suddenly
shed the scales that put me in your vision
as you describe it. I see no such man
within my mirror, but thank the heavens
that you see me so. And how do I see
you? Aphrodite shone as bright, I’m sure,
yet your steadfast nature is earth scented,
unlike Venus’s too fickle fragrances,
therefore so much the more desirable.
Yet, how can I compare you and be fair
when she is myth and you of fleshly make
she I wonder of—you I worldly hold.
David M Pitchford
Villanelle for Dawn
Wake Me
Night’s indigo legions rise to fall each night
this sleeper’s eyes grow heavy with gloaming
Yet Dawn’s promise thrills my dreams, fills my sight
Wake us from dreaming to hope-born delight.
Star riders on dream-steeds, we go roaming
to hunt Midnight from rise to fall each night
amid night’s empty spaces, ‘tween stars’ light
and angel nebulas to sky’s foaming
birth. Dawn’s promise thrills our dreams, fills our sight—
Oh gossamer Eos, bless us with your light
lest our hearts grow dull, succumb to the gloaming,
fall to night’s indigo legions, to Night
Oh gossamer Eos, queen of hope and light,
wash in your dew this bitter dream! Combing
in Dawn’s promise of thrills and dreams, fill our sight
Eve is natural, the end of days is no blight,
yet we fear day’s end, clinched in Death’s loathing.
Night’s indigo legions rise to fall each night,
yet Dawn’s promise is thrills to dream and fulfilled sight.
David M Pitchford
5 August 2008
This is a draft of a villanelle.
Our Book is Coming!
After the Vows: Poems Between Lovers
My wife and I collaborated on this book of sonnets. We’ve been writing a dialog of 14-line poems since about 2001, and we’re finally getting published! We’re sosososo excited!
I’ll update this post with more information on where to get the book soon. And, of course, post a couple of samples from it!



