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David M Pitchford: poet, novelist, fringemonkey

On a Stephen Crane Poem


On Stephen Crane’s #23
(The Black Riders and Other Lines)

 
Places among the stars,
Soft gardens near the sun,
Keep your distant beauty;
Shed no beams upon my weak heart.
Since she is here
In a place of blackness,
Not your golden days
Nor your silver nights
Can call me to you.
Since she is here
In a place of blackness,
Here I stay and wait.

 

Because I could shed no candle-watt of flame
to light or heat your darkness, because I
failed to warm you in your cold hell, to light
any path from that black oblivion,
because I am helpless to rescue you
who know not how to rescue your own life,
your heart, your soul—because I could not
convince you to open yourself to light
and love and the beauty of the cosmos,
I shall stay with you in oblivion
and shun the sun with its gardens of bloom,
its incense-bearing blossoms, its golden
rays and soft stars; yes, no more silver nights
nor those nightingale notes shall call to me.

 

David M Pitchford
16 April 2009

21 April 2009 - Posted by bitterhermit | After the Vows, Denver, Poetry, death poems, depression, dysfunctional, ekphrasis, esoteric, fellow travelers, grief, grieving, love poems, mind alive, national poetry month, on writing, poem, self empowerment, severe depression, spirituality | , , , , , | 2 Comments

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  1. Future Unknown

    In whose oblivion do you shelter?
    With whom do you share this light-less future?
    The flicker of flame from soft candlelight
    casts shadows across my path; I know that
    nightingale song will ever sing your name
    and that along the horizon, sunrise
    promises azure skies with starlit nights
    to follow. The fragrance of evening blooms
    tempts me into the garden, beautiful
    with vows of forever more and silver
    linings. I linger with my heart against
    the edges of where I am – listening
    to the future; it is hope-full, unknown –
    the chance to learn to trust and love again.

    © Siobhan
    04-22-09

    Comment by mother2rah | 22 April 2009 | Reply

  2. Shallow Respite

    Oblivion lies beneath each line, sub-
    text of hope in slivered linings, silver
    in the light of mind shined optimistic
    despite deep shadow and benighted heart.
    Too long I fed on bitter dregs of despair,
    soaking in the oily mire as though hope
    were Hydra with her myriad heads, each
    a gaping maw ready to swallow each
    bit of heart it tore in tortured segments
    of eternity—oblivion gulped me
    into its acrid belly to find new
    stars, a new moon, new galaxies, and suns
    bright as life, bold as love, soothing as words
    from my lover. I found hope in losing all.

    David M Pitchford
    22 April 2009

    Comment by bitterhermit | 22 April 2009 | Reply


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