Another surf-by sonnet


Sonnet of the White Rose

Am I the quintessence of innocence?
So be it. But I have thorns. Is this not
paradox? Oh lovely dualesence!
Why do you pluck me? Is it then my lot
to be plucked and thrust into that clear vase
that any may adore me? Or ignore?
What a fortune for beauty! To serve base
lust, to please the eye-poetry implore . . .

Oh, but are we all not symbolic? Words
that suggest, but never are the true thing?
Though in voices pure as heaven some sing,
are we more than melodies, songbirds’
piping to the moment? We are but white
petals blown by fragrant breeze and sunlight.

                                 David M Pitchford 92807

I wrote this in response to a poem by
http://janetleigh.wordpress.com/
You should check out her blog – especially if you like free verse poetry. Soulful.

My lovely wife, a very fine poet, have written a dialogue in sonnets going back to, well, I think 2001 or so. There’s not enough of that going on; or at least I haven’t seen it. Someone, sorry not me, should open a forum or blog or online workshop in which poets could converse in verse. Reply to a sonnet with a sonnet, or a villanelle for a sestina, or free-verse response to a pantoum or whatever. Thoughts? Sound fun?

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One thought on “Another surf-by sonnet

  1. I just saw your sonnet-response to one of my creations on my blog, bitterhermit; thank you so much for referring others to my blog, Poetmeister, too. It’s quite the compliment. I still feel the thrill of discovering your sonnet-response to my white-rose piece; I love the unexpected.

    I think you might find Joe Felso – Ruminations blog at http://joefelso.wordpress.com/ to your liking. He writes haiku-sonnets and you might be able to persuade him to start such a project with you. On a smaller scale, you might enjoy participating in group poem endeavors on Poets Who Blog
    at http://poetswhoblog.blogspot.com/ . Perhaps you could float your idea to the webmaster there. I think your online workshop is a marvelous idea. 🙂 Good luck!

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